Fanfiction

My Immortal by cool_saihara03

Chapter 1.

AN: Special fangz (get it, coz Im goffik) 2 my gf (ew not in that way) kaede, pianobaka95 4 helpin me wif da story and spelling. U rok! Kyoko ur da luv of my deprzzing life u rok 2! MCR ROX!

Hi my name is Shuichi Dark'ness Dementia Raven Saihara and I have medium length ebony black hair (that's how I got my name) and grey eyes like limpid tears and a lot of people tell me I look like Gerard Way (AN: if u don't know who he is get da hell out of here!). I'm not related to Gerard Way but I wish I was because he's a major fucking hottie. I'm a vampire but my teeth are straight and white. I have pale white skin. I'm also a detective, and I go to a school called Hope's Peak Academy in Japan where I'm in the seventh year (I'm seventeen). I'm a goth (in case you couldn't tell) and I wear mostly black. I love Hot Topic and I buy all my clothes from there. For example today I was wearing a black suit and a black hat. I was wearing white foundation and black eyeliner. I was walking outside Hope's Peak. It was snowing and raining so there was no sun, which I was very happy about. A lot of preps stared at me. I put up my middle finger at them.

"Hey Shuichi!" shouted a voice. I looked up. It was…. Kyoko Kirigiri!

"What's up Kyoko?" I asked.

"Nothing." she said shyly.

But then, I heard my friends call me and I had to go away.

AN: IS it good? PLZ tell me fangz!

Chapter 2.

AN: Fangz 2 pianobaka95 4 helpin me wif da chapta! BTW preps stop flaming ma story ok!

The next day I woke up in my bedroom. It was snowing and raining again. I opened the door of my coffin and drank some blood from a bottle I had. My coffin was black ebony and inside it was hot pink velvet with black lace on the ends. I got out of my coffin and took of my giant MCR t-shirt which I used for pajamas. Instead, I put on another black suit and black hat.

My friend, Kaede (AN: pianobaka95 dis is u!) woke up then and grinned at me. She flipped her long waist-length golden hair with pink streaks and opened her pink eyes. She put on her Marilyn Manson t-shirt with a black mini, fishnets and pointy high-heeled boots. We put on our makeup (black lipstick white foundation and black eyeliner.)

"OMFG, I saw you talking to Kyoko Kirigiri yesterday!" she said excitedly.

"Yeah? So?" I said, blushing.

"Do you like Kyoko?" she asked as we went out of the dormitories and into the cafeteria.

"No I so fucking don't!" I shouted.

"Yeah right!" she exclaimed. Just then, Kyoko walked up to me.

"Hi." she said.

"Hi." I replied.

"Guess what." she said.

"What?" I asked.

"Well, Good Charlotte are having a concert in Towa City." she told me.

"Oh. My. Fucking. God!" I screamed. I love GC. They are my favorite band, besides MCR.

"Well…. do you want to go with me?" she asked.

I gasped.

Chapter 3.

AN: STOP FLAMMING DA STORY PREPZ OK! odderwize fangs 2 da goffik ppl 4 da good reveiws! FANGS AGEN KAEDE! oh yeah, BTW I don't own dis or da lyrics 4 Good Chralotte.

On the night of the concert I put on my black suit and black hat. I straightened my hair and made it look all gothic. I read a depressing book and I listened to some GC. I painted my nails black and put on TONS of black eyeliner. I didn't put on foundation because I was pale anyway.

I went outside. Kaede was waiting there in front of her Dad's car. She was wearing a Simple Plan hoodie (they would play at the show too), over her school uniform.

"Hi Kaede!" I said in a depressed voice.

"Hi Shuichi." she said back. We walked into her Dad's car (the license plate said 666) and flew to the place with the concert. On the way we listened excitedly to Good Charlotte and Marilyn Manson. When we got there, we both hopped out of the car. We went to the mosh pit at the front of the stage and jumped up and down as we listened to Good Charlotte.

"You come in cold, you're covered in blood They're all so happy you've arrived The doctor cuts your cord, hands you to your mom She sets you free into this life." sang Joel (I don't own da lyrics 2 dat song).

"Joel is so fucking hot." I said to Kyoko, pointing to him as he sung, filling the club with his amazing voice.

Suddenly Kyoko looked sad.

"What's wrong?" I asked as we moshed to the music. Then I caught on.

"Hey, it's ok I don't like him better than YOU!" I said.

"Really?" asked Kyoko sensitively and she put her arm around me all protective.

"Really." I said. "Besides I don't even know Joel and he's going out with Hilary fucking Duff. I fucking hate that little bitch." I said disgustedly, thinking of her ugly blonde face.

The night went on really well, and I had a great time. So did Kyoko. After the concert, we drank some beer and asked Benji and Joel for their autographs and photos with them. We got GC concert tees. Kyoko and I crawled back into her Dad's car, but Kyoko didn't go back into Hope's Peak, instead she drove the car to... JABBAWOCK ISLAND!

Chapter 4.

AN: I sed stup flaming ok Shuichi's name is SHIUCHI nut gary stu OK! KYOKO IS SOO IN LUV wif him dat she is acting defrent! dey nu eechodder b4 ok!

"KYOKO!" I shouted. "What the fuck do you think you are doing?"

Kyoko didn't answer but she stopped the flying car and she walked out of it. I walked out of it too, curiously.

"What the fucking hell?" I asked angrily.

"Shuichi?" she asked.

"What?" I snapped.

Kyoko leaned in extra-close and I looked into her gothic purple eyes which revealed so much depressing sorrow and evilness and then suddenly I didn't feel mad anymore.

And then….

"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING YOU MOTHERFUKERS!"

It was…. MONOKUMA!

AN: STOP flaming! if u flam it menz ur a prep or a posr! Da only reson Monokuma swor is coz he had a hedache ok an on tup of dat he wuz mad at dem! PS im nut updating umtil I get five good revoiws!